Wait for it…
Wait for it…
This is such an exciting time of year! I love the autumn. It is a sign of things coming soon… Thanksgiving, Christmas, New Year’s, cooler weather, long hours writing great stories, and snow ice cream. I love my snow ice cream. But in Oklahoma, we only get enough snow every four or five years. I have my fingers crossed for this year. In the meantime, I’m doing what I can to insulate our home for cold weather. How about you?
This Saturday, October 24, 2015, I’m holding a workshop for folks who want to write a novel in 30 days. This is the last workshop for the year, so don’t miss it. (Click here for more info.) If you’ve written a novel in a month, please bring some helpful notes explaining how you made it all the way to the end. This workshop will be more about sharing and helping each other. We’ll have a table or two for you to leave copies for others to take.
In recent months, many things have been happening for me. I’ve been holding more workshops, attending great conferences, winning some writing awards, and working hard to bring The Adventures of Dayton Barnes to the market very soon.
Next year, thanks to a good deal of interest, I’m expecting to hold a few of my workshops online. Hope to see you there.
Have a wonderful and exciting autumn!
This Saturday, August 22nd, I’ll be holding another workshop in Broken Arrow for folks who want a little more insight on writing believable dialogue. Visit the website for more information.
In the meantime, here’s a tip:
Include the setting in the dialogue. Let your characters use that setting. Have them pick up the piece of paper they are talking about, stare at a picture on the wall, or spill a drink on new clothes.
People don’t just talk with their eyes closed, in the dark. There are things all around us. We move within that space and use those things. Let your characters do the same. Let them “experience” their surroundings the same way we do. When you go back to edit your work, don’t forget to make sure you activated all the readers’ senses (sight, sound, smell, taste, touch) through the characters.
See you on Saturday!
Click on the pic to learn more about the workshops.
Don’t miss Stop the Head Hop on Saturday, June 27th, 2015.
A lot is going on for me lately. In January, I set up a MEET THE ILLUSTRATORS! Night for a couple of local writers’ groups. We enjoyed learning the information they shared.
In March, I have called together a panel of five area publishers who will answer questions at a MEET THE PUBLISHERS! Night in Tulsa. That event will be at Martin Regional Library (in the auditorium) on Monday, March 9th, 6:30 PM. If you come, bring questions.
On Saturday, March 21st, I will be offering a workshop in Broken Arrow, OK, called EDITING YOUR FICTION STORY. Writers will learn fun, easy editing tricks to expose the real story behind the words. Find more information at http://jespiddlin.com/designingtheworldwithwords
THE ADVENTURES OF DAYTON BARNES – A middle grade fiction anthology to entertain ages 9-12. The submission deadline has been extended to the end of March. A lot of wonderful stories have been submitted. Some have been accepted, some have been rejected. Find more information about submitting, visit http://jespiddlin.com/DaytonBarnes/submit
ANYTHING GOES, VOLUME 2 is a multi-genre, unthemed anthology that promises to be just as good as Volume 1 from last year. The authors are working hard to bring you an exciting collection of stories this summer. Yes, I am editing this volume, too.
I have a few writing conferences to attend this year. Will you be attending any? Which ones? Good luck with any contests you enter and at all the conferences. Learn as much as you can and share!
I am editing a very interesting story for 4RV Publishing that will be coming out in just a few months. I’ll let you know when it is published.
Don’t forget to write notes on the back of people’s business cards that you collect, to help you remember special discussions, etc.. It makes them feel special when you recall conversations and know where you met them.
The Adventures of Dayton Barnes anthology is taking short story submissions to entertain ages 9-12. Multiple stories may be accepted per author. If you’re interested in writing middle grade stories / chapters for this anthology, check out the website at
Deadline for submissions is February 28, 2015.
There’s More To It!
“Eyes wide…” What does that mean, exactly? Does it indicate someone is scared? Shocked? Excited? In a mood transition?
Without realizing it, many writers use vague descriptions of emotions that leave a reader clueless. In fact, “eyes wide” is probably the one cliché that irritates me the most. Why? Writers use it all the time, but they often forget to explain WHY the eyes are wide. They assume the phrase says it for them. How does the reader interpret those words?
Being a writer means having the ability to shape new worlds, new situations, new people. With that power comes the responsibility to give the reader enough information to draw clear and correct perceptions into the story.
Writers sometimes forget we use our whole bodies to communicate in person. Subsequently, they use vague descriptions. Sometimes, multiple meanings are possible. Here is an example:
——Johnny climbed the steps to the porch. His sweaty palms slipped off the doorknob as he tried turning it.
Sweaty palms frequently mean someone is nervous, possibly even scared. What if someone has sweaty palms because he is overheated? It does happen, you know.
——Johnny could barely lift his legs to climb the steps to the porch. Beads of moisture covered his face and neck after a hard day’s work in the sun. His sweaty palms slipped off the doorknob as he tried turning it.
That small amount of information helps the reader understand the guy is not nervous. He’s about to collapse from exhaustion. Even if the reader had previously told us Johnny was going home from work, without more information, we don’t know if the sweaty palms are from fear or the heat and hard work.
On a somewhat related note, is the discussion of clichés. Why do authors use them and why aren’t they okay to use?
What is a cliché? It is a phrase that is commonly used in speech and often in writing.
——She was sick and tired of being sick and tired.
——He looked like he’d stuck his fingers in an electrical socket.
It would be easy to write a whole story using clichés. Readers want to read something fresh and new. They expect writers to be creative enough to design a story without using someone else’s words. Make your own clichés.
Recently, I had only two spare hours to sleep before a very busy day. My mind chose those two hours to haunt me with the one emotion cliché I cannot stand. I finally reached for the pencil and paper beside my bed and wrote every line my brain insisted I preserve, before I snagged the last few minutes for sleep. Later, I organized those lines into the terrible “poem” below. Look closely and you will see there is not enough description to define the emotion intended by “eyes wide.” I suppose the reason for sharing the poem is to encourage authors to always make their descriptions clear without being redundant or annoying.
Please pass this around and help more writers understand the importance of showing the emotions, because “tell without show” is very weak writing and clichés are so unnecessary.
TRIBUTE TO A MEANINGLESS CLICHE’
By Renee’ La Viness
7 Mar 2014
(This meaningless story is dedicated to all my special author friends
involved in the creation of the Anything Goes, Volume I Anthology.
Always use descriptions that define.)
EYES WIDE, she entered the world
And heard the words, “You’ve got a girl!”
EYES WIDE, she held her new dolly
Until she and Mommy got off the trolley.
EYES WIDE, she told her brother
That, if he took it, she’d get another.
EYES WIDE, as her boyfriend chased her,
But the romance died when the author erased her.
EYES WIDE, her dress was a sight,
The splash of colors made her look just right.
EYES WIDE, she held his hand.
She said, “I do,” for the small piece of land.
EYES WIDE, she drank the last drop,
Then traded the cup for a bucket and mop.
EYES WIDE, she got on the bus
And sat by a child who was making a fuss.
EYES WIDE, she watched for the car
That would take her uptown to the 5th Street bar.
EYES WIDE, she walked through the park
Under the street light that lit up the dark.
EYES WIDE, she blew out the candle
And stared at the clock that sat on the mantle.
EYES WIDE, she opened the door
And entered the room she’d not been to before.
EYES WIDE, she sat in the chair
And watched all the people ignoring her there.
EYES WIDE, she had the miscarriage
And decided they didn’t need kids in their marriage.
EYES WIDE, she looked in the mirror
And spoke to her husband, who still didn’t hear her.
EYES WIDE, she walked in the cabin
Where all the drama supposedly happened.
EYES WIDE, She ran to the river.
The water was so cold it made her shiver.
EYES WIDE, she stared at the flames
That flickered and faltered and died in the rain.
EYES WIDE, she farted out loud
And said, “Pardon me!” as she fled through the crowd.
EYES WIDE, she lay on the bed,
But sleep didn’t take her, because she was dead.
EYES WIDE, dumb words on a page,
Have no real meaning and send Renee’ into rage.
Getting ready to tackle the 2013 NaNoWriMo Challenge? So am I. I wrote my first 50,000+ word novel last year. I was shocked, but thrilled at my own success. I had so much fun I’m doing it again.
Here is a list of ideas I wrote for myself in February. I hope it will also help you. Please share a link to this page if you know someone else who could use a little help.
Whatever you can do in advance to get a better idea who and what you will be writing about will be very helpful to you when you begin writing your novel.
1. Make a list of things you know a good deal about. Your list might consist of any of these or more:
The ideas above will help you form story lines (sub-plots) you can use in your novels.
2. Make a list of things you want to know more about. Use ideas from the list above or others you can think of. These will be the things you want to study about before it is time to write your novel, so you can easily use them.
3. Make a list of ideas the main story line in your book might be about…
4. Make a list of the main characters your story will be about. Give each person:
5. Determine some other items, locations and other detailed info you will need for your main characters –
6. Make a list of your supporting cast.
If any of these people need a little more detail about who they are, what they do, etc., go ahead and make a list for them, too.
Basically, you want to get to know your main characters and begin to think of things that might happen in your story line. You will need a main plot — the overall problem and solution the book will be about, and many sub-plots — the smaller challenges or “chapters” that daily life offers us all, once in a while. Lists #1, #2 and #3 will help you design and organize those plots.
When you actually start writing, some of the things you have already decided will change. Don’t let this bother you, but be sure to make the changes in your notes, so you will still have a good reference when your book is almost finished and you need to refer to the info, again. Also, keep a copy of your notes on paper or on a thumb drive as well as on your computer. If your computer crashes, you want to have a backup copy.
Now that you’ve got your story background designed, let your mind wander along the story line you would like to follow until it is time to write. Feel free to make guideline notes (about what will happen when) to keep your story on track when you write it.
You will only need to write about 1,667 words per day to finish your novel in time. If you start doing some daily writing now, you will be conditioned to working in a specific time and place and your family will be used to accommodating your needs. By writing something almost every day, you should have little problem meeting your daily quota during the challenge month.
Don’t know what to write about on a daily basis until it is time to write your novel? Start a journal and write about how your day went. Or, write a fictional story every day. I try to write a factual journal entry most days and a fictional journal entry most days. I sometimes miss a whole week at a time, but I write as often as I can.
Keep yourself focused on private time when you write. No Facebook, no texting, no phone calls or company.
Here is a good place for more NaNoWriMo suggestions: Nano Prep: The NaNo Jar